Spire, the cartoon is starting to look pretty good. We need to do some little touch up's on it, and spice it up a bit. I assume you fixed most of the little problems promptly after submitting it. I think we need to try to clarify the storyline a little bit more.
Get in touch with me and we can work on it.
P.S. the roomies thought it was funny...but knew the voice was you.
Those were some awesome skits, and you threw them together with such randomness, definitely a top 10.
I like the style, you are a very capable "flashist." The content was funny and reminds me not to aid the war on drugs. Good luck with your other "inspired" randomness.
Not bad animation
Your stick flow is pretty good, it's a little hard to see all the animation zoomed out.
That was some hardcore stick action. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more toons from you in the future, maybe some longers ones.
I liked the message
The message of the short was good, keep working on your graphics. Looks like you have some good material, just need to push the picture.
Good transitions...for a quickie
If this was a bored project, then not bad, redo throw in some senseless violence and you got yourself a short.
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